When you close your eyes,
For that One Last Time,
Will you see my face,
Just before you die?
When you slip into,
That soundless sleep,
Will you count the tears,
For you I'll weep?
When you're flying fast,
Through the broken glass,
Will my song to you,
In your mind pass?
I don't want to loose,
When there's so much there,
Please don't take away,
All for which I care,
And when you're lying there,
Will you face the truth?
Will you think that I,
Might follow you?
When I tell you of,
My hurt, my pain,
Will you be the one,
To put my through again?
I've before now,
Had death destroy,
The world I knew,
All hopes and joy,
When you kiss my lips,
And you say goodbye,
Know you can take my life,
Long before I die,
I've put so much,
Of all I possess,
To see you smile,
To feel your kiss,
To be The One,
Don't blow out the flame,
I don't want to be,
Alone again,
Let me be a reason,
For you to stay,
Let me love you til,
MY dying day,
For when I count my blessings,
Count you one million times,
Please stay with me,
Through out my whole life.
x♥x
Author notes
For the lastest contest:
Big Fat Emo, option 4 [anything that relates]
A contest entry
- depressed by serenity silvermoon.
450 points, ended April 4, 2007, 39 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Suicide - make it stop! by reinhardt-napoleon.
750 points, ended May 11, 2007, 36 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - what is it about suicide by LovemeNHateme.
300 points, ended May 22, 2007, 13 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - September is Suicide Awerness and Pervention Month by FallenFromGrace1102.
2620 points, ended October 3, 2008, 70 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Suicide from another point of view
Comments
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Beautiful write, i really liked this, keep up the awesome work. i wish yoku the best of luck in my contest and thank you for entering this piece. i really liked the lines:
"I've before now,
Had death destroy,
The world I knew,
All hopes and joy,
When you kiss my lips,
And you say goodbye,
Know you can take my life,
Long before I die,"
*~*bee*~*
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love it great job
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wow
good job. thanks for entering.
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hello.
this is a really great poem! full of emotion, and yes, i can feel your plea, see your eyes that beg...
wow, it really touches my heart.
thank you for entering and good luck in my contest!
p.s.: i won't applaud before my contest closes, sorry!
Keep on writing - I'm keeping on!
Stop suicide.
Joey -
A strong piece filled with deep emotion, excellent. Thank you for entering and good luck to you in the contest...mal
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this is a very beautiful poem. filled with emotion and deepness. so many people go thru pain like this , as I do. This makes it even more better because I am able to relate. a job well done.
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wow
this was the best love poem i had ever read it made me cry you are a great poet and if we are not friends already i hope we can be thanks for sharing i love this poem so much you have a way with words and thats the way i like it this left me speachless and crying thanks for sharing and God bless dianna
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