Chillin' in my room just passin' the time
Sittin in my chair lettin' thoughts flow
Lookin at the walls I begin to rhyme
Paper and a pen the soul begin to show
Diggin deep inside my heart
Love and Hate provide inspiration
Usin' this pen to drift apart
Words my pencil for this illustration
My head spins in all directions
Heart and mind begin to click
my arsenal full of lifes connections
Work, parties, friends, or even a chick
I cross out Ideas as I go
Each thought has a life of it own
Ideas come plenty an overflow
Each line a thread that had to be sewn
Fixing the rhymes makin' them mine
I use my own stuff and my own style
Mine is an art to which most cant define
It's hard bein outta game for a long while
The radio works as an aid
Words filter through the thought bank
Songs over and over constantly replayed
I plow through mental block like a tank
I finish it up and think of a title
Revising and typing making personal goal
Poetry and breathing to me just as vital
A vision, a peak, A glimpse in my soul
In a list
A contest entry
- Rhyme Time by Kevan.
390 points, ended March 3, 2007, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The perfect poem by xandercheerios.
800 points, ended March 3, 2007, 26 entries
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wow this is good and has great imagery
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This was brilliant, I can just imagine this urban and raw guy sitting there, the creative process in full force, all your poetry flows really well and never sounds forced, loved this, it had a real good vibe, great write, keep it up, Romanee, xx
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A chick huh?
LOL this was goooooooodddddddddddd Really good. You are an excellent writer and now you cant ever tell me different damn it lol. This was a brilliance on your part witht he rhyme and you word usage was great too. Wondeful AGAIN!
Always
Emily
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i really like this one
its jus a little different from everyone elses which i really like becuz i like to be different
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Sounds like a rap song. Not bad... but not quite what I'm looking for. You really gotta take into consideration that the reader won't be able to hear what you're saying, so they probably can't follow the rhythm of the poem. The rhymes were good, though, and that I like!
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Awesome!! The wonderful flow and what not, you've done a great job So many writers here can probably (most definitely) relate to this feeling of getting inspiration and building up ideas to create a good write...like this!
Ty
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