thoughts of distant flesh
coursing through my arteries
my blood boils for you
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From a title provided by Amera
Subtitle is: "Start Swimming Al!"
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Hello there! I love your user name - half perverted, half viruous! very nicely conceived.
Your avatar is very funny too, LOL.
I see you like the old-fashioned 20th centrury style of writing haikuish poetry. Good for you. Don't come into the modern world, it's too fast and there are too many rules.
Your loved one probably loved this poem you wrote for her. It is full of desire and longing. Awesome!!!
have a gr7 day,
BJ.
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Better take a bath in cold water. No wonder your fever is always so high! -
Too short lol. It made me wish for more. I am not usually a fan of the small worded poetry, but this, was indeed magnificent. I did not need the picture to see desire and feel the heat of yearning.
"My blood boils for you"
Oh sigh* If only a man could truly want a woman that way.
I loved it.
Lady Blue~
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Oh, indeed I do! Just ask her. It is so nice to see your face in these parts again. Thanks for stopping by.
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Oh? You've met Amera? She is captivating, isn't she! Like a transfusion of excitement. If you haven't met her, let me introduce you. Thanks for the comment. -
I believe this to be one of the best haikus I have read. The words are so simple and yet so full of passion it makes me yearn for more.
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Good comment, I'm yearning, I'm yearning...
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This haiku is lovely. It expresses a feeling, a deep emotion that moves you and only I understand it. Thank you Allan it’s a true personal poem.
I love you, Amera
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Love you back. Want to thank you for posing for this picture I have added. Gave you credit for the title, too.
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