Let Me
Let me take you from behind
Spank your ass while I grind
Thrust my fingers in your twat,
You squirm and drip as I do that
I tug the chain from a nipple clamp,
And talk to you like a cheap tramp
Yank your head back with a fistful of hair
I do this with certain definite dominant flair
Thighs all wet from your dripping cunt
I want to make you sweat, hear you grunt
Slowing down I want to make you beg
My own juices now flow down my leg
Standing in front, my crotch in your face
I ride your tongue at a slow, steady pace
‘drink my cum’ I gasp, ‘my pretty pet’
As it squirts your face like a water jet
Once I’ve cum I resume from behind
I fuck you fast I know you don’t mind
As your orgasm nears I gag your mouth
Drop to my knees, suck you down south
Spread your lips wide, expose your pink clit
Lick all the way from your ass to your slit
Heaving and drooling you await my command
Standing up I thrust in hard, ‘come now’ I demand
Order obeyed your body shuddering with release
You lay on the bed, I leave you to sleep in peace
My pretty little pet, I do love you so
Beautiful and satisfied, your body glows
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Sheesh woman. I can't read stuff like this when I'm supposed to be working it's way too distracting!
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"As your orgasm nears I gag your mouth
Drop to my knees, suck you down south
Spread your lips wide, expose your pink clit
Lick all the way from your ass to your slit"
~ ~ God Damn!!!!! Baby...I was LOCKED and in DEEP climaxing EXCITEMENT waiting for every word to just pour out!!! Man....I love this shit!!!!
MUAH, 143,
Your...Felony baby!~ ~
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thanks for stopping and reading this Adam, iv missed you on AP.
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thanks babe *beams from ear to ear* your comments are always looked forward to and appreciated.
love you madly
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Muahz!
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*pants like a dog*
I do think this is the hottest thing I have heard in a very long time. GREAT work, ang. Magnif. Keep it coming, keep it coming. <3
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thank you for your wonderful comment my sweet love
ang
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dude! im all flushed now
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ROFLMAO - is that all i get flushes?!?!?!?
ang
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TREMENDOUS PIECE
WONDERFUL WRITING. I HAVE SAID IT BEFORE AND I WILL SAY IT AGAIN, YOU MY SISTER ARE THE ABSOLUTE MASTER OF THIS TYPE OF WRITING. IT WAS GRAPHIC, RAW, HOT AND VERY VERY POWERFUL INDEED. I LOVED IT. BRILLIANT PIECE ANG. WONDERFUL STUFF. MORE PLEASE.
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thank you my dearest Brother i love you madly and am convinced you are my biggest fan.
thanks
ang
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ouch!
very graphic. I couldn't help but feel a tingle og desire as I read your very descriptive words. you absolutely painted a vivid picture setting the stage for a very erotic read. I loved your pictures and the border. thanks for sharing. peace always in all ways.
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*Curtsies* thank you for your wonderfull comment kendalpalmer *grins from ear to ear*
ang
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that is brilliant writing... i love the way you actually say it as you feel it... well done on a fantastic write
cheers
Jen
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thank you Jen, i have not written much erotica for the past couple of months, so i think this has to be a good come back (excuse the pun)
ang
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lol, i wasnt exactly expecting this when i clicked on the poem
but i am still glad i did. clearly you have a knack for the erotic lol.
i must thank you for the mental images though, i have already showered and i wasnt far off going to bed but, i think i should probably go and have another lol, i think acooler, much cooler one lol
the imagery is well suited lol.
keep on writing.
cheers.
Til
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LOL, thank you for your honest comment i do so love making ppl need a shower
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very impressive!!
I must say this is quite different to me.. but I thought it was truly well done.. The photo went with the poem well.. A very good write..Thank you for sharing this.
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thank you for reading and commenting on this is appreaciated
ang
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HELP!!!!!
Well I know at least im your pet Very good, just let me know when we are gonna act it out.
Again not many can surpass you in this type of writing
Well done
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thank you Lisa, i do so enjoy writing erotica
ang
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