thinking hoping, screaming flailing
dreaming of sleeping , of dying
knowing the truth seeping through
knowing, but there is nothing I can do
fighting myself , and fighting fate
what is it the whole world can hate
try to decide, the decisions i need
know the rules but don't take heed
get by in this time, get by while i can
evolve passed my mere capablities as human
examine the lies, examine the secrets hidden
try to ignore the images desperately, unbidden
revolt the extreme, hold close the ordinary
what they try to embed in my future, be wary
blaze my own trail, discover the new, the odds
don't be fooled by fools complicated facades
exuding helplessness in reality hunting
dreaming, sleeping, knowing, dying
Author notes
hey ~ er yeah. The odds is definetly odd hn
Please tell me what you think
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Very good poem, Love.
-Dante
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Looks like someone's indulging in the BIG picture.
Careful my dear amo, get too far from the shores of the shallow and you just may find yourself drowning in the deep.
I get the impression of your dream world or more like the world as your percieve it, slowly being invaded by the harsh realities as they bleed through from your subconscious. Pondering life and its meaning, finding faults in other's perceptions that they convey onto you, To rebel? To resist? and when and where to do so?
In my interpretation of your poem here, you are looking at the vastness of the universe and realising just how small we really are in comparisson to such a big picture.
Best you can do is just bite off what you can chew. No use in choking to death on the odds that seem insurmountable. Or maybe I'm just crazy!
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wow...cool...deep...and tastes slightly like chicken...eyeballs
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Wow... Great work!
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i like it such a good write with such power i loved it!!!
thankyou for the read keep on writing
~*Muse*~
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Unthinkable but logical...lol
I liked it Cado!!!!
*huggles*
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hmm, this is interesting and kind of werid but in it werid in that way it makes a lot of senese, keep it flowing
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