You pissed me off
I hate your guts!
If you were here you'd have no nuts
You are just a fake and liar
I hope you burn in hellfire
I'll watch you burn
And feed the flame
Your so fucking lame
If you were here
I'd punch your face
You are just a wasted space
Prick!!
Author notes
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A contest entry
- I Want Anger by Welcome-To-Hell.
750 points, ended March 8, 2007, 33 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Love... Envy... Fabulous by Pretty Britty.
750 points, ended April 4, 2008, 46 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Wow... feel the anger in this one! lol
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Wow, you really are ticked off in this one. Sometimes it is just good to find a release and let it all out. That way when you do see them, you don't punch their lights out like you dreamed of many times. I sure feel the angst in this one and is very effective. Good luck in the contest.
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yes he was an idiot would still moan if the Pope praised him,lol thankyou for having a read, and commenting
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Whew!
Remind me to never criticize your work! Really this was intense. Great job. Good luck in the contest.
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No No please lol criticize away i really dont bite
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wow ok so you definately give him what he wants.. you have definatly portrayed anger in this write, well done and i wish you well in the contest
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LOL a bit to much you think ?
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Scary. I like it.
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Im not really that scary you know lol
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This is exactly what I was looking for short and powerful and so full of anger and rage perfectly penned for what I'm looking for
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Im usually very laid back, but he DID piss me off, Full of it
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