An orgasm is a spaceship
Taking you from your home.
Exploding moon unit.
There are no planets.
You have no sun.
A moth falling into bed.
You can not breathe.
Your blood boils in
this emptiness.
With emptiness.
Author notes
An exercise in juxtaposition. Don't just sit there, tell me what you think!
Please tell me what you think
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Hmmm. I think you need to make an effort from here on out to get your poetry assignments done before midnight. :-P
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Confounding
I identify with the last 3 lines.
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I've never really heard someone try to explain what an orgasm is,but you did well.Next time,I'll scream to my boyfriend,"Baby where is the moon?"
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umm...explain this?? Juxtaposition..not too familiar with it??
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contemporary erotica
so this is what i think: it reminds me of a very pink vibrator. it isn't the one that looks like a penis, or is specifically shaped like a penis. i think it's called a rocket pocket, the one with the oval thing, remote controlled. rocket...spaceship.
breathless after it.
this is i think a contemporary piece of erotica, paints the now-ness of ours.
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this is an interesting piece to say the least lol. i think you have done quite well. i will have to get a few of my ap friends to check it out also. keep up the good writes. i look forward to seeing more from you in the future.
cheers
til
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