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. n o w .

Come closer now, let's fade into the
still darkness.
The stars above us, pull my body into
your hips.
Locked into time, let's forget about the
worldly worries.
Wandering slowly up, pull my neck into
your lips.
Trapped in the moment, let's fade into the
forbidden beauty.
Quiet whispers now, pull my every thought into
your dreams.
Come closer now, let's forget about
the hurt
Come closer now, let's forget about
the world

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First one in quite awhile.
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  • Violent Messiah
    February 22, 2007
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    Its funny how everything stops when you're with that special someone. Great job

  • killerpiggies07
    February 22, 2007

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    awesome

    i love this poem. it really paints a picture in my head and emotion in my heart. i kinda feel this way to right now. i really love this poem!!!