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How could this happen to me

How could this happen to me, the pain im going through
was it something I did or something ill do?
Did something not turn out right
I've made my mistakes theres no where to run, life will go on
this will all fade away.

But in the end will it all matter for I have took the life of another?
Will i be forgive or damned by all of humanity?
But whoes to judge thoses who lie and steal they too have to repent
But what of my Bloody murder will it go and be forgotten or be rembered forever?

I wish I would have listened when they said they were friends,
But the pain was to much.
Now I sit a pay for what I have done and here ill rot in these walls of steel.
Who is to say how long ill be never to kiss the head of my kids again
never to tell my wife I love her.

The bloody murder ended it all but how could this happen to me?
When all i did was try to save you from yourself but in the end it was to much and I paid the price.

How could this happen to me?

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Frammed with murder and nothing can be done

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  • FarFromFlawless
    August 4, 2007
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    understandable

    I like it=) its very relateable in some ways.


  • TwiztidMaggot
    August 4, 2007
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    wow, this is a truly dark poem. you did a good job writing it out. We all ask that one question: How could this happen to me? sometimes we even ask :WHY DID THIS HAPPEN TO ME?! but, we won't ever really know the answer. you did a great job writing it, tho. keep up your good work!

    Crimson


  • Aiyoris Maryian
    February 26, 2007

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    okay...

    As usual, so dark and lovely yet this time, I was lost without the author notes. I liked this one, too, but "Blood" is still my favorite of all.


  • L. J. Arien
    February 22, 2007
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    er um...cool but i'm so lost haha :-P


  • Forget
    February 22, 2007
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    Oooooh. I likie!!!


  • Dawrion Darklinmoon
    February 22, 2007
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    Intresting

    My my, That very intresting, which is a good thing , that means it kept my attetnion.


  • Dragon Aleph
    February 22, 2007
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    Well....

    It's not bad but...its horrible haha j/k I know your secret muahaha

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