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The Blade

It is like the moon:
White clad
Silver piece
Of the universe.

It is a token
Of hope and revenge
Trust and fate
That bears responsibility

It is a blade
Sharpened to kill
Cherished to protect
True innocence.

It my sword
My soul
And I carry it with pride
And with reverence.

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  • islekine gold member
    September 5, 2007
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    Very interesting write

    Write on!
    *PEACE*


  • Angel Lunarious
    February 23, 2007
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    I like this poem a lot. It flows real smoothly!
    Thanks for entering and good luck

  • Tercarro
    February 22, 2007
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    interesting perspective

    I like the perspective you have used and points you make which I think are about love.
    TC