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The only guarentee in life



Ancient, wizened trees
Yet all bonsai will and has died
Eventually

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(is death)

A contest entry

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  • sandgoddess
    March 9, 2007

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    thank you!

    Hi Fluofontis,

    We thank you for taking part in Jo's contest 'The cliche/non cliche haiku' with such a wonderful piece.

    we are truly honored!

    rachel and chiquita


  • NoWayJo
    February 26, 2007

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    Initially reading your haiku reminded me to all those now-dead bonsai trees my cats had chomped-on through the years--(For a while my EX had a bonsai-tree hobby, which the cats also enjoyed)!

    I like that this haiku does have more relevance than the silly image I came to see through it...and thank you so much for this entry to the contest!

    Jo