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Choppy.

So.
Here we stand all
Alone.
No one, just no one.
Cares.

You-
So..Superbly
Silly.
I love it.
Stay
That way forever.
But-
Don't talk to me.

I-
Don't care about
your
problems.
They
aren't important.

Personally,
If this was
Over.
I'd be glad.

You-
Stop trying to help me.
Listening-
isn't helping.
I
Need solutions-
Such as-
"Kill her"

How wonderful.

I might do that.


If only I believed in Death.

Author notes

So..Boredom does have it's upsides.

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  • Artemis Revenge
    May 25, 2007

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    Wonderful dahling...I can't believe I haven't seen your poems in a while. -yawns- Well, I'm off to bed.

  • becky123
    February 22, 2007

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    oh wow. very powerful. i love how everything is just so emphasized with the one word lines. whats it about?

  • -Jarred-
    February 21, 2007
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    DEAREST! I like it!....but...what is this about?! you should tell me...GLOMP!