The cage I am in carries a two part name: Writer's Block.
It swings on rusted chains above a dungeon of death.
The bones and blood of previous victims litters the floor.
The demon will come soon, demanding the work of ages.
In the cage I huddle, hiding behind carcases and death,
The words come out in taunting phrases and mismatched words.
The demon wants his work of ages or my soul.
The fight is on, who shall be victorious?
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Created January 1, 2007. Yeah, I had writer's block bad..so I went on Hiatus and left this as the reason why.
Please tell me what you think
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lions have pride
WOW
I feel this peom
feel the emotion
i have not been able to write in this place for some time,, as i do not write i feel some empty void deep within
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Lions Have Pride!!
Welcome back and happy to have You!!
I went on a hiatus some time ago and came back with quill on fire but it still took some time
Thank You for sharing this and hopefully Your quill
will get to dancing again also
Powerful piece penned with images that definitely left the mouth agape but I wish You only Happiness
Many blessings to You
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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LIONS HAVE PRIDE!
An apt description of wanting to force someting out and the feelings that go with it. Even though you may have felt blocked, this piece is strong and full of images galore. Well done.
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LIONS HAVE PRIDE!!!
I know this feeling quite well! But I do not think you had a cas of it when you wrote this, this is amazing! I love it! Great job!
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You call this writer's block? I call it gorgeous. Very nice write, and I love the imagery.
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Thank you.xD Yes, I call it writer's block, but with a definate twist. I really appreciate the complement.
xD
Luna
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Writers block only in the minutest sense of the word,
This one shows that she [Ms W. Block]
Was still lingering in the background;
But you failed to feel/see her presence.
This turned out amazing for a case of writers block....
You did brilliantly....
Jeffro -
I still love this, totally brill, sweetheart.
Do tell me if I can help you get out of your cage, or at least toss you a dildo and some magazines. Lol.
Mistress Allura
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HAHA! Only you would offer that.xD I am actually trying to start the next part of Vampire Desires...but I first have to trick my demon in to letting me out, at least for a bit of air.xD
*Naughty Kisses and Thoughts*
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Yes, only I. Haha, gotta vibe that's up for grabs if you prefer it. O_~
Ooo, excellent. I look forward to it. I'm tempting my Muse to allow a little story about life "'round 'n' 'bout the dungeon" here, but it's not yet taken the bait offered.
Love, Caresses,
Smirks, and Spankings. xD
-Allura
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Lol, well it is a very well written reason. I really like this. The imagry is done well as well as the flow. The only thing I see that could make it better would be to substitute 'the cage' in the second sentence with something refering to it in order to help the flow a bit. It seems a bit repetitive, but then, that's just my opinion ^^. I loved the theme of this. I liked the last line a lot... "The demon wants his work of ages or my soul" Definatly shows how menecing writers block is. Great write.
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I hope you have come out of your writers block. Sometimes it just needs a jumpstart by way of something happening in your personal life to get you off the funk. Good imagery in your write and thanks for sharing.
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It is funny to think someone could write such a beautiful piece on writer's block.
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No way.. This is great and hey I just got back from having WB sorta im not 100% but im writing again a lil bit and thats kinda funny I wrote something that was titled Writer's Block what a qawinkadink! all in all it'll come back to ya.. Just try and not think about anything for like 2 weeks you can write like lil jots of ideas like words or phrases. It helps...maybe lol well anyway This is great so far hopefully you'll come back and finish when you got your brain in working order again
Best Wishes,
-Acronym
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I can sooooo relate to this!!! I have been having troubles writing lately, for personal reasons, but am beginning to find my way out of the "cage" as you call it here! Great job on this one. Keep them coming.
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