Weeping through, I begged for you
to fly the midnight skies with me,
beyond the sea,
to spectral places where we,
together for eternity,
might die before the throne of the Queen,
sleeping forever in gentle refrain,
safe from the horrors that stalk through the day,
bleeding through, I begged for you
to let me give you everything,
my soul would sing forever blessed
in my chest
for only one more second of this dance
you have perfected,
of this nightmare I,
neglected,
suffer agony to find,
dancing through, I begged for you
to come into the grave with me,
a ghost and free,
forever be my lover and my mystery,
weeping though, I danced with you
as you refused and I,
illusions fading,
died again and left you
to your emptiness.
A contest entry
- Sadistic Emotions by Never Fall in Love.
650 points, ended April 11, 2007, 76 entries
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Comments
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Better now
You have penned a deep write
I liked the beginning
it really held the reader
to keep on reading
But later on it's like it lost its beat
and the rhyme also went downward
anyway, good luck to you
NeveR ♥ -
Is this a poem or a story
Please fix the run-on sentences .. and I will read later
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