A forest fire
Burns all that rest within, yet
Balance is returned.
Author notes
The Fire Nation is a natural part of life.
A contest entry
- Sokka's Haiku Festival!!! by Shadow Fairy of Twi.
365 points, ended March 12, 2007, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Haiku any style by misticmoonlite.
700 points, ended February 11, 30 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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so true, better to be controlled as to have wild fires destroy homes, thank you for this entry, good luck mm
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Beautiful- very enlightened way of looking at fire.
This is a great traditional haiku- nice!
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hmmmmm...this is an awesome haiku...especially since i've been learning about environmetal sustainability lately... but i think it applies to everything...no matter how much bad happens if something is determined or meant to be... it will be... wel should all be like that...people who can be burnt and see it as a way of putting to dust those things that were unwanted and then return to what should be... VidZ
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This is very good, but I have difficulty telling exactly which character this is coming from. It flows very nicely and the background adds to the poem a lot. Please clarify which character's point of view this is from.
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lol, you know i have never really thought of it like that, you opened my eyes, keep it flowng and good luck in the contest
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