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Lanturne- Hydrated

Try
trickles
of water
for refreshment
Here.

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By RIP Whoever. turned 12

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  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    February 22, 2007

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    A beautiful Lanturne Well done to you and good luck in this contest!
    Gaylene


  • Namita
    February 22, 2007

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    True poetry!
    What a beauty RIP whoever.
    This is simply just so very wonderful.
    No problems with the syllable count here.
    An awesome write of trueness and beauty.
    Keep it up, you talented young poetess!

    Luv,
    Candy