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Ten dollars!
That’s not enough
If I tell the police
They’ll treat you rough

At my tender age . .
You should be ashamed
To give such a sum . .
You must be deranged

I was young and tender
In your brutal arms . .
And I surrendered
To all your demands

And now this insult
It’s hard not to weep
But I won’t breakdown
You evil creep . .

Such humiliation . .
O’God! . . Life is hard . .
I’m so glad I took
Your credit card

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  • Heavens Child
    March 11, 2007

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    This is very clever. For some life is a terribly hard struggle but usually it gives the determination and the know-how to survive any way we can. Very well done!


  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    February 21, 2007
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    lololol....what a great entry to end off the contest.... it is funny but not...it is so much the truth with all the child prostitution going on.... but that she got his credit card gave me a womderfully righteous guffaw.


  • Ladybug
    February 21, 2007
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    LOL, brillantly stated. I'm glad for her she took the card.