He smokes.
He lies.
She dreams.
She cries.
He gropes.
He plays.
She screams.
She prays.
He hurts.
He rapes.
She runs.
She hates.
He hits.
He sins.
She shoots.
She wins.
A contest entry
- Have Fun! by KissMeGoodnight.
490 points, ended March 23, 2007, 28 entries
Silver trophy winner
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oh SHIZIT! NO YOU DIDNT! IM SO IN LOVE!!!!!!!!! this rocks man, reminds me of my poem 'regret' except urs is more punchy.
you dont need the luck i was gonna wish ya 
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WOW!!!
i really really lik this one! GREAT WRITE!
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AM -- "simply" great.
Wow. I like this. I have never been able to abide with the concept that women are less strong. This woman took the "step." What a neat way to put the "crud" of relationships into a proper "sob" perspective. Great justice!
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Wow...so few words...yet packing such a punch.
Bravo!!!
Whyitt U
xoxox
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Simple, but hard-hitting. Unfortunately, justice is never complete in this situation. And death for the perp. doesn't end the trauma for the victim - who will live with it forever. Good write.
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Thanks. I know.. just kinda popped into my head.
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