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Seasonal In-Difference (Oddquain)

spring
runs quickly
as summer skips by
fall crawls and winter simply
chills


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  • Samplette gold member
    February 21, 2007

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    This was nice because I knew what you meant...you have "falls crawls and winter simply" instead of "fall crawls and winter simply" other than that a good job. Thank you for entering. :fSam