Dawn
start of day,
Soothing beautiful
alluring tantalizing
Dawn.
In a list
A contest entry
- Who Loves Short Shorts #11 by Samplette.
300 points, ended February 21, 2007, 15 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Great write. I love the words you've used.
soothing, alluring, tantalizing, ... great imagery created by the use of those words.
Wow.
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very beautifully penned, this poem complements the picture extremely well. A very enjoyable read.
Rory -
Beautiful, you brought the 'Dawn' bursting to life within so few words, giving us the special meaning the start of day seems so much to have for you, Thank You and Congratulations on the HM!
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BEAUTIFUL
So simply delightful. A wonderful piece. So pleased to see the HM here.
~Pam 
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OH this is beautiful and in sync with the pic! Makes me and gives me something to be grateful for... words like these and skies like that! Best wishes my dear friend!
Frogz~
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Dawn, as so with dusk can be ao beautiful. Your words tell it all. I thank you so much for entering the contest. :fSam
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Wonderful expressed
I believe that this is wonderful expressed. I'm not one for formula poetry, so the words and meaning are what I look at. This is very beautifully written with feeling and imagery and spiritual thoughts of nature. Keep the ink flowing. Love and hugs...
~Donna~ -
very good
sometimes the only good things in life for me is to see the beautiful dawn or sunset thinking of what a wounderful God to make such wonderful colors then it comes to me that if we did not have so much poullution in the air what would it look like keep doing well
love papa -
Interesting, a cinquain only with an odd number of syllables. I think it would have more of an impact if you chose another word besides repeating 'dawn'. But thats just my take on it. Other than that I love your choice of words, they work very well, it's not choppy, it flows.
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