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Hand,
yours in mine.
No longer alone,
reaching out towards the light.
Home.




A contest entry

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  • LAPoe gold member
    February 23, 2007

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    Oh Mr. C... how tender and touching, sweet and serene.
    Your home is heartfelt.
    That is until you turn the light on... then OH MY..
    How you've changed. Home may be where the heart is
    but it is also where the ice cream is. Double scoops.
    laurie.


  • Samplette gold member
    February 21, 2007

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    Oh I like this one as well. reaching for the light...Home. What a visual it gives me. thank you for entering the contest.
    Sam


  • paperparadox silver member
    February 21, 2007

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    Nice image here

    You've caught the simpicity of love quite perfectly in this 'Oddquain'. (I haven't read the contest blurb prior to writing this and I'll have to start all over if I go now, so I'll finish first !).

    ...I like lines 1 to 5 best! Don't change a thing, and very best of luck...