Marred images
blur my vision
I try and define
what I see and what is
Seeking truth through
eyes that lie
My other self lagging
behind and separated
from my ego
Needing to see the real
me, naked and humbled
Seeking the beauty in
the eyes of the beholder
In a list
A contest entry
- Tell-tale Look - closes this evening by CarolDesjarlais.
450 points, ended February 21, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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You touch on it here. Learning to see with the eyes of the spirit. But, you do not exercise it, only mention it.
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Delightful and mysterious
Yes, we desire to find the truth, walk with honesty and integrity, but many of our friends are deceptive, liars, and would mislead and hurt us. Loved this.
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Oh don't we all ahve that wicked shadow that follows us and nags, and scrutinizes, and pretends it knows the truth...ty so mcuh for entering.
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The distance between what you think you know and what is actually known can be as numerous in miles as there are stars in the sky.
Yeah.. I like this one a lot.
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wow...awesome insight of finding you by looking inside...loving it....The "prez"
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