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[ The sun shines but it's warmth doesn't reach me. ]

The sun shines but it's warmth doesn't reach me.
The moon glows with happieness but I can't see.
The world is bright with joy;
With happienes;
But I have become blind.

The wind blows but it can't touch me.
Th birds sing but their song can't set me free
The noises and feelings of a carefree world surround me,
But I have become deaf and numb.

The clock strikes four,
Time for tutoring; I don't want to do it any more.
I don't wan to put on this motherfucking smile,
I don't want to bottle up my sadness.

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I don't even know. I've been really fucking depressed this week.

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  • WishMeAway--x
    February 25, 2007

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    Depression is something you and I are both experiencing. I'm surprised I'm admiting this, but well, I can see it in my poems.
    I don't wan to put on this motherfucking smile,
    I don't want to bottle up my sadness.

    love those lines, cause I know whats thats like too. Don't you ever get sick of wearing a mask to hide who you really are?

    Wonderful job on this too!
    Love
    ♥♥