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thoughts



Thoughts,
walking through
the winter garden;
remembering all I lost -
you.



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re mem ber ing....I count 4.....phew!

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  • LAPoe gold member
    February 23, 2007

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    Nothing like cold thoughts to warm up a sad day.
    You are 'ON' today my friend. Absolutely stunning!!!
    When I like to remember someone fondly I walk barefoot
    over hot pavement. I don't know why? laurie.


  • Samplette gold member
    February 21, 2007

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    Now this is a strong romantic write. Winter is a lonely time for so many and this brings that out. A beautiful write. Thank you for entering.
    Sam