Mother Winter embraces
Summers child
Creating rainbows
as Fire and Ice commune
Clouds rumble above
Holding back their tears of rain
not to disturb the beauty
they behold
The breeze plays music
filling the air with a
symphony of planetary
splendor
Life connecting to nature
Earth connecting to sky
Blending into a universal
deity
In a list
A contest entry
- Pen me beauty by zochit2me.
525 points, ended February 24, 2007, 8 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Beautiful
I love this peice and the picture you choose compliments it so well. the ending line has got to be my favorite.Blessed be -
So interesting the gender you offer winter...so often winter is seen as the patriarchal plunderer. You have taken back the mothering of earth during a hard season and given her the personality of a hand on the cradle.
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Awesome and peaceful penning, beautiful presentation. The imagery was fantastic as well. I thank you for your entry.
Becky -
Awwwwwwwwww!
Pleasure to read, as im love nature and all the things that fill this earth, the beauty of it all, is so awe-inspiring and beautiful. Thanks for sharing.
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You have here a beautiful poem. Well written and smooth sounding. Keep up the good writes. Great job.
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BEAUTIFUL
My sister you have truly penned a beautiful piece...I could see,feel,and just be with your words...Life connecting to nature, Earth connecting to sky,Blending into a universal deity
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Absolutely gorgeous..these words create one heck of a beauty..what a symphony of colors, imagery, flowing mysticism of nature flowing into an explosion of a write. Excellent job! Well deserving of a trophy! Could not pen anything more beautiful! Good luck! Splendid!
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