Answers elude me,
Questions abound...
Lost in this mystery,
Confusion surrounds...
Please tell me what you think
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hey i am not getting the message or main point of this poem umm... which is totaly a mystery to me. I think the poem is a little vaige but it makes you think what the hell are you taking about.... still good job on that. i guess some things are not to me answered
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This poem although short, seems pretty deep. It's a riveting read but it seems incomplete. The dots at the end of the poem kind of suggest this as well. It's like a teaser and has the reader expecting a bit more.
It could however work like this, but you could consider building on to it as time goes by. Great work princess!
~noir
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Short and to tha point
Nice write chica
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Hmm...it has a nice air to it; mysterious, yet light...
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It might be short, but I think we have all felt this way at some time in our life. There is a profoundness about it. We all have questions that have yet to find answers. Nice write.
Sam
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Thanx for your comment!
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Oh I love the shortness of this and the rhyme...The concept too of lots of questions with few answers. I enjoyed this!
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Thanx for your comments!
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