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Laughter of Sorrow

Life is a rollercoaster is it
Up and down it goes with it
My soul is angry to witness it
My body will follow afraid of it
Rings of pain I have to wear it
The laughter of sorrow I can hear it
My heart's flames I can see it
To ashes it came for dust to burry it

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  • Sean Logue
    November 15, 2007

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    Nice and dark.

    Go girl!...like it, I've read a couple of your works thus far and like them.
    Keep to the shadows.

  • Kim6
    August 22, 2007
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    Very Good!