Letting go….
Many of my friends know
How I have hung on to my past
Many said I need to let go
Or my pain will last
I have learned a lot
That I can move on when times are tough
Even when I believe
Things are just too rough
I hate being depressed
Because of my friends and families deaths
Seeing my loved go on
And take their last living breathe
I am letting go
Of all the pain that consumes my heart
I letting go of the voices I hear
That tear what is left of my world apart
I am sick of hanging on
To what makes me sad
My friends notice my tears
And when my life is bad
So I am letting go
OF all the bad shit in my life
I am letting go
So I can end this strife
I have struggled to be happy
And I couldn’t push myself to do it
But not I have the strength
To get myself thought it
My life will get better
Because I am letting go
Hopefully my tears will dry
And my smile will start to show
I would like to think my friend Kevin
He never turned away
He told me I was strong
And I go make the sadness go away
I am letting go
Of my dreadful past
I am letting go
So it can kiss my ass
Please tell me what you think
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Very Beautiful
This was beautiful. Though it made me shed more than a tear.
Very nice.
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i am sorry it made you do that but thanks for the comment
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haha yes! beautiful ending, givem all you got! This was a simply beautiful poem, why did i not for you before
. Its love in the first degree 
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lol....thank you so much for reading poem. I wrote this because in my past i have had a lot happen to me and a lot of people i have loved have died...so i wrote this to let people know i wasnt gonna let it eat at me anymore and i was sick of being depressed. and as i said in my poem. my past can kiss my ass lol. but thanks again for the comment
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NICE................really nice work very touching, good reflection.......i feel prone of you heh....
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thank you
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Sounds as if you are maturing and learning lots about growing up. It is not easy, and sometimes takes a long time, but these feelings and past memories can sure hold one down if they are held on to for too long. Liked that last line - sassy and right on.
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thank you very much grandma i put a lot of work into my new poems
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haha i like the last line.lol "kiss my ass" i hope u get happy soon.
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thanks
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This was a very good poem! I loved it! Only a couple of changes: In the 7th set of lines, the last two lines in that one should be
"But now I have the strength,
To get myself through it"
And then in the 9th set of lines, it could be something like:
"I would think of my friend Kevin,
He never turned away,
He told me I was strong,
That I could make the sadness go away."
Idk, something for you to think about... Great write anyways. *hugs* -Nick
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thank you nick
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:-D You kept a sense of humor in this one while still keeping a rather serious tone. I liked it. The rhyming was slightly forced though.
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thanks
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