Don't know what I'm gonna do
All these things I'm going through
All those things I wanna say
Other things get in the way.
You don't see me
I don't see you
It's all insane
What we say an' do...
Don't know what I'm gonna do
All the angst and anger too
All those things I wanna say
But other things get in the way
You don't see me
I don't see you
These games we play
will never do...
Don't know where I'm going to
with all these things I'm going through
All these things I wish I'd said
Leave me empty; feeling dead
You don't see me
I don't see you
It's all insane
What we say an' do...
Don't know what I'm gonna do
All these emotions in a stew
My head is aching from the pain
As we go through it all again
You don't see me
I don't see you
It's all insane
What we say an' do...
A contest entry
- Take me away by --Beautiful--.
685 points, ended March 19, 2007, 22 entries
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Great lyrics!


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Very good. I'm not much a fan of rythming but you still put good effort into this. It is a great poem Thank you for entering my contest and good luck!


