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You don't see me...

Don't know what I'm gonna do
All these things I'm going through
All those things I wanna say
Other things get in the way.

You don't see me
I don't see you
It's all insane
What we say an' do...

Don't know what I'm gonna do
All the angst and anger too
All those things I wanna say
But other things get in the way

You don't see me
I don't see you
These games we play
will never do...

Don't know where I'm going to
with all these things I'm going through
All these things I wish I'd said
Leave me empty; feeling dead

You don't see me
I don't see you
It's all insane
What we say an' do...

Don't know what I'm gonna do
All these emotions in a stew
My head is aching from the pain
As we go through it all again

You don't see me
I don't see you
It's all insane
What we say an' do...

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  • waydownuponjoy
    February 22, 2007
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    Great lyrics!


  • --Beautiful--
    February 21, 2007

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    Very good. I'm not much a fan of rythming but you still put good effort into this. It is a great poem Thank you for entering my contest and good luck!