ion
me
etcetera
please
chomp
chat
whisper
breeze
morpheme
blessed
shackle
tease
sinless
assaulted
page
under
pointy
poet's
quill
eclipse
murder
rest
scurry
bone
tale
sum
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A contest entry
- Something out of the ordinary... by lucy sky-diamond.
600 points, ended March 11, 2007, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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'piercing' instead of 'pointy' - hmmm.
I like 'pointy' for the layers of meaning.
But I'm a bit strange with word-associations.
This is a fine poem.
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pointy it shall be not piercing is too male macho stab stab stab...bullshit
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i love this poem! maybe 'cuspate' instead of pointy? Just an idea because I know you were worrying about it. It sounds great as it is though. Well done and good luck in the contest!
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a very clever poem, i like how you have described writing through great imagery and metaphors. thank you very much for your entry, and good luck
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Thank you for those words. I am having trouble with "pointy" really feel it doesn't belong.
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