The moment of lightness I've been waiting for snaps into place with the rhythmic clack clack clack of heels on cobblestones older than my own country.
Souris!
Finally I can skip down Quai de Béthune giddily rolling my r's until I arrive, rosy-cheeked and confident about this new life.
Author notes
Not a poem so much as relieved stream of consciousness.
Comments
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I like this, short and open for the imagination. I think I'd definitely rate it higher than 5/10, just because the kind of mental image this gives. Good job.
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short
really short but yeah
it may need a little work
but i'd give it a
5/10
good luck
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