The morning light glistened on her teary face
Her body moved with an undefined grace
She walked towards the greying painting
Of age old stories and myths in waiting
Into her imagination she elegantly fell
Not to return from the realm of fantasizing cherry bells
Please tell me what you think
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Excellent
Excellent flow and tast eof wording through out this poem is what really matters the most through out this poem. loved the way this flowed and loved the wording all over the place. any ways good work all round and keep up the good work.
Bro 
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i love the way this poem flows. its awesome
- katie
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wow that is so pretty and it shows so much.
i like the lines;
She walked towards the greying painting
Of age old stories and myths in waiting
it tells of so much that has happened, will happen or something that will never be.
well keep writing and having good ideas
whiteroseblackrose
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