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Unromance

I like you a lot
with a sizeable chunk of my heart
You make my eyes water
whenever my thoughts head your way
My organs throb in unison
from an interminable desire
I wait with sighing resignation
bearing your inarticulateness
in muffled despair

I hurt all over

again

Author notes

Just wanted to write something with less than romantic language, to reflect the 'mundanity' of an unrequited love.

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