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Waking Life

Voodoo
agony.

Gelatin
nightmares.

Buffering
life.

Origins
evaporated.

Language
mistranslated.

Monuments
collapse.

Metaphorical
mirages.

Creation
Perfection
Temptation
Destruction
Armegeddon

waking
life.

A contest entry

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  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    February 21, 2007

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    Wow! Very indepth and very well done! Wonderfully and uniquely created; I wish you all the best in the contest!


  • lucy sky-diamond
    February 21, 2007

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    i like this poem very much, especially the last stanza. thank you very much for this profund entry, and i wish you best of luck in the contest