Agh! Oh no! This monkey’s chewing on my shoe!
Help me! Help me! What should I do?
I don’t want to hurt it,
But it is hurting me.
An eye for an eye that’s what I always say.
So I bonked it on the head
But it just bit me harder.
“Hey, don’t you realise my shoes are PRADA?!”
An old lady passed by and saw my anguish.
She lifted her frail leg and gave its tail a squish.
The monkey squealed and collapsed with pain.
“Go me” the old lady said in vain.
She turned around and said
“be careful dear.
You may not be so lucky next time when I’m not here”
She turned around and I watched her go.
I watched her big hips swing to and fro.
I think that old lady was quite funky!
She saved me from the shoe eating monkey!
Author notes
I am only 14 and this is my first attempt at writin a comical peice...not very good!
Written June 21st, 2003
What did you think
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haha, it's hilarious!! you should write more poems
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A shoe biting monkey. That is very strange....I love it!!!!!!!
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I never thought I'd find a poem about a shoe biting monkey that I liked but you did it, I liked it, all the other ones I've read about those monkeys have been crap. Well done. I still don't know why I am laughing though!
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thanks for commenting on my story. i read this and it was just too funny i loved it keep writing and always share. your poetryfriend
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i think its very funny make some more i could do with a laugh or too
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lol! this is the grreatest poem you have written! lol... i really like it! i needed a laugh anyway! tahnkx
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Hehe. This made me chuckle out loud- a sign of a good poem. Well written with a nice flow and light rhyme scheme. Of course, lets not forget the good content!
Keep it up!
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I really liked this, it was so funny! I can definately see it in a children's book with some great illustrations. Good write. Keep it up!
~Mal -
hotter than buddha
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Strangely funny! Great job.
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great job!
Well, hello, there!!!!
And how are you doing today??
Just monkeyin' around.... I thought this was very, very good.... Very creative and it put a big, sincere smile on my face!!!! I love reading poems about or for children.... They're always sooo much fun!!!!
I really look forward to reading some more of yours, just as soon as I can!!!! Keep writing, and do take care!!!!
Very Sincerely,
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i like it but I have a fetish with monkeys i am strange there are stuffed monkeys all over my room just luv them luv them luv them
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I love your write!
AWWWW!!!! That was really cute I liked it a lot!! I really like monkeys they are so funny!!! Keep up the good work and I would love to see what you come up with next!!
P.s. Next time you see that old lady, tell her my tail still hurts!!
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*smiles*
Ya got me giggling here!
I can imagine a shoe eating monkey!
Yes... I've got a crazy imagination!
I did enjoy!
Keep penning on my friend!
Bill -
lol. I liked this a lot. It's nice to read children's pieces. You did a pretty good job with this, ( i thought it was funny) Nicely done!
*Amanda*
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Aww, it's a really cool childrens write (even tho i found it very entertaining) Really good write and the the rhyming is perfect.
Thanks for sharing
Steve
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