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Nothingness

An empty building stands at the top of the road
ts the building where memories were made.
drifting off into eternity its now nothing.
no one knows what really happened
no one cares
that oh so horrific night
when the winds shattered the glass
letting in the cold chill
making it unbearable
soon we drifted away from it
soon We drifted apart
the only thing we had was that building
the building that now lies inhabitable
at the top of the road

the building thats now been forgotten.

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  • Reanna93
    April 9, 2007
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    wow that is pretty deep awesome job


  • hoodoolover silver member
    February 21, 2007
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    Great job on your entry, thanks very much! Stark and lovely!