I want you (weneedyou) so much I can taste it (somuchithurtsus)
I have to (wewantthis) touch you, just once (enoughtobleedyou)
My hand feels skin (wescreaminpleasure), soft and smooth (wishingwehadclaws)
You turned and looked (webaredourteeth), because I surprised you (sneakinguponit)
You try to scream (nodarlingdont), but I cover your mouth (shhbabygirl)
I'm so aroused (bloodpumpstoourgroin), I can't let you go (andourheartskipsabeat)
I don't want to hurt you (wewanttohurtyoubadly), but you won't stop fighting (showusyourteeth)
Please, don't make me hurt you (makeusrendyou), I whisper softly, hoarsely (rendyoutodeath)
My hand feels skin (weshriekinpleasure), cold and shaking (wishingwehadclaws)
Your head hits the pavement (sickeningthuds), and crimson stains your hair (lovelythuds)
No! I can't do this (webreaksomethingsoft), I can't do this to you (andbloodstartstoflow)
I need you to be still (webreaksomethingelse), please, just be still (wethinkitsafinger)
I've gone too far! (wecantstopnow) This has to stop! (notuntilweeatit)
Just stop (wesmashherface) moving! Stop fighting! Stop (breathing)!
Please, don't cry! (wegougehereyes) No, don't cry! (bloodpoursliketears)
I wish I could stop (nevernevernever) doing this to you! (wetearoutherhair)
I weep bitterly (smashingherfaceintothepavement) because I can't stop (dontwanttostop)
I scream, tears splattering (ontoherbloodstainedform) the ground (twistedlikeabrokendoll)
(frenzyfrenzyfrenzy) I run away
Author notes
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A contest entry
- Darkest by Shiro Okami.
816 points, ended March 1, 2007, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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You dont seem to have your trophy... for honourabley winning... I'll try and fix that. Sorry.
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Amazing.
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Passionate, brutal and beautiful. What more needs to be said.........
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It was difficult, for some reason.
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Were you holding back on it? I find writing hard if I try to avoid saying something or completely going with how I feel.
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I think it was the humanity... the beasts screaming for her blood were easy, natural, but I needed to try to portray something human from which these beasts could come... I needed something upon which to base the sense of frenzied passion.
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