What do you do
when you thought it was all over,
but you find out that it's only beginning?
And then you find yourself
all alone again
in a room full of mirrors.
"Stop!"
You cry as the room starts to spin,
but no one is there to help you.
Falling to your knees,
you beg for one more chance,
but nothing happens at all.
What then do you do
when you know you're on the edge, weeping,
and someone takes your hand?
Your honest opinion, please!
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WOW, this certainly took a unique direction and can be interpreted many ways. I like that you left it exactly the way you did,
nice job to say the least. Hmm gonna have to find a better phrase, that one ounds overused and weak but i do mean it! 
Best of luck in this and all of your endeavors. 
Hetohke'e * 
YOU HAVE JUST BEEN HOODWINKED
; Courtesy of the Poetic Bandits
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You've been Hood-Winked by the Poetic Bandits
the saddness, the fear of being alone, thinking noone cares and then the light of a hand...Wow outstanding imagery great flow of words I found this to be grand, so very touching...can;t wait to see more of your writes
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Wow! That was something, something very good.... I likee.
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Why thank you very much, miss.
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Aww this is emotional and VERY GOOD poem! Loved it from the start till the end. I really am honest. Awesome job my dear Carrie.
Keep writing & God Bless
~MagicalMoon~
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Yay! Well thank you very much!
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aww Carrie, I loved it! i really really did, and it was kind of sad. but i liked it a lot, good job!
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Oops! I think I messed up with this reply... Hehe! Wait nevermind. But it was meant to be a little sad, I suppose. Thanks for the comment!
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Beautiful work. Thank you for the amazing write.
Lizzy
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Thanks! It's not my best, but I like it a lot too for some reason.
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We always need that someone to take our hand. This is a great piece. Gives the reader a lot to think about.
Nice job.
Sam
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Thank you for the comment!
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