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Protest.

Profound
scars,
make,
sadness
resides.
Souls
refuse
oppression,
fight
break
apartheid.
Tongues
ask,
why
children
die?

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  • lucy sky-diamond
    February 21, 2007

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    raises some interesting questions, good use of rhyme at the end. thank you very much for your entry, and good luck


  • less than a poet
    February 21, 2007

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    out of d ordinary indeeeeed and doomday struck again best of luck in d contest


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    February 21, 2007

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    Wow you did it my friend Very cleverly written! I would suggest a few punctuation maks that would make the meaning a bit clearer.
    My best to you in this contest
    Gaylebe