Telepathy.
Inborn.
Conscious
understanding?
Adaptable?
Adept.
Naturally
demanding.
Knowledge.
Abilities
inherent.
Apprehensive.
Plausible.
Possibilities
extensive.
Seething
exploratory
surgical
sensations.
Incision.
Cerebral.
Lobotomy
ligations.
Experimental.
Ominous.
Accident
procures.
Foreboding.
Derelict.
Gifted
overtures.
A contest entry
- Something out of the ordinary... by lucy sky-diamond.
600 points, ended March 11, 2007, 27 entries
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Please tell me what you think
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very good
intelligent poem that makes you think, i liked it
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Wonderful vocabulary and use of words with strenght. Very creative and unquie.
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very clever piece, good use of vocabulary. thanks for your entry, and good luck in the contest
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very interesting... very short and interesting style...
all in all... i loved it... its great to be simple sometimes... and to the point...
great job...
-tabbykat -
Very clever piece.
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Thanks, but actually, it isn't really mine. I used telepathy and read somebody else's mind.
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