I am waiting to exhale
Not ready to release you
I find you in my thoughts
More than I want you there
Sustaining in the shadows
Living with the moments that
have created the “US” that I crave
I have no right to love you
you have no right to love me
but love we do
Forbidden love, so bittersweet
Perched on pedestals
we adore what we create in the hours
of sweet intoxication
Through your loving
existing and nonexistence merge
Lover and loving have become inseparable
How do we walk away?
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Option #3- Forbidden Love
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a modern tale of Romeo & Juliet...
Sometimes, the hardest thing to do is to walk away from the one you love the most. It's forbidden love that tears at your soul as if it were frail parchment.
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Great work with this write!
Thank you for your entry in the contest!
Best of luck to you with it here!
Jeremy0826 -
Very true
Most difficult to walk away from a love whether its forbidden or a one for us. Great piece.
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Oh my, this is wonderful! Technically the work is sound regarding the free style structure and the flow. Your choice of words lends an in-depth description of the image. This was both good and bad for me as I am going through that same indecisive turmoil in my life right now. Well done my friend.
Love, Amera
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reminds me of the song.. beautifully written! the picture is rather interesting i must add, you are very unique! love it! keep up the great work and thank you so much for sharing!
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Oh, my....an age old dilemma, I fear. What a beatuiful write, gf....
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very deep. and i enjoyed the forbidden aspect of it as well. reminds me of caesar and cleopatra
well penned.
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Very nicely done. Oh.. I want to be one with someone right now. heh. Always a pleasure to read your work.
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