Stay with me
just a bit longer, please
it's getting colder
we're getting older by the minute
losing our days by the second
so all I want from you
is to just hold me a little longer
nuzzle my cheek with your own
[though yours is a bit rough
I don't mind at all].
Complain about my hair getting in the way
rub my lower back
make fun of me, I don't care
just as long as you stay with me
just a bit longer, pretty please?
It's getting colder
and the time is slipping through our fingers
[yes, like sand in an hour glass]
and I don't want you to fall through as well...
Author notes
I wanted to add it to the lune, but then it wouldn't be a lune and my first and only form would be RUINED [heh] so I just wrote something that was pretty much inspired by what I previously wrote. :]
Please tell me what you think
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*nuzzle*
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Thankies. =)
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YOU RHYMED. :] And I loved it. I'm getting to where I only like on/off rhyme and not like... aabb or abab rhyme. You've corrupted me, ho. :]
'Complain about my hair getting in the way'
boys are dumb. they all do that. well, michael hasn't yet, but, I've heard it before, XD
I love it. :]
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of all the people, I KNEW you would be like the only one who noticed I actually did a rhyming thingy haha.
haha yeah the hair thing. Adam like moves it out of the way and grumbles about it, but he doesn't do it right. You know how we just tuck it behind our ears when it's in the way or do the whole push it out from the front [XD wtf I suck at explaining stuff] he just kind of like pushes it out of my face, but it just goes right back. I tried to show him one time, don't think he learned from it though.
♥ &butut;
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Lol I like that you expanded it, the bits you added were sweet and made me sigh because I'm feeling the same right now
beautiful write madikins x x x
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Haha awww is Aleee still with her one man? Or is it a different one now? We haven't discussed your boys lately. We should.
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Yep still with the same one guy. Its cool. But... MEEEEEHHHHHHH ... something bugs me. Immensely. And I don't really wanna talk bout it here so... i'll tell you later. But my AIM doesn't work anymore so if you've got msn or an email addy, gimmie that and i'll write to u, lol. x x x x
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Aw very sweet,
'nuzzle my cheek with your own
[though yours is a bit rough
I don't mind at all]. '
My fav lines, just because of the nuzzling
Ty
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Aww thank you.
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Thanks
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