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All I Can Do

All I can do,
is sit and wait,
for my knight to come through,
and its something I hate.

Take my hand,
hold me close,
help me learn to stand,
without my support posts.

Be my guide,
and i'll be yours,
be with me in stride,
for anything that a person endures.

I've not been lucky,
in love thats for sure,
lately it has been sucky,
i've been trying to be mature.

All I can do,
is just be me,
and just wait for you,
hopefully you can see.

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spur of the moment writing. yaa.....

Pleaaaaazzzzzzzz Coooooooommmmmeeeennnntttt!!!!!!

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  • musical-psycho
    February 20, 2007

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    Kenzie,

    This is much better than your last piece and that one was great. So that makes this one uh...ummm...FANTASTIC!!!!!! THAT'S THE WORD I'M LOOKING FOR. Your writing holds a certain elegance to it now that is hard to find in most young poets. Very nice write, I loved the whole thing, and this is perfect.

    - Cait -