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Oh, mama mop these kisses
from of the tiles
    A Cinderella tale has now grown old


And take the timepeice
from of the hedge
    so I shall never love again

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  • SensualWhispers
    March 13, 2007
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    Wow.. this is really good.. now if this would have been one of your first 5 poems, I would have accepted it. Thanks for trying. I totally understand wanting to win. but this is too many poems. Sorry but you are disqualified. Kassie