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[ Usually I kept it to myself ]

Usually I kept it to myself
'Cause I don't want anyone to find out

They asked me why
I never told them
The things that they said
Were enough to make me want to die
They said it was disgusting
They said that it was wrong
But who are they to judge?
They never knew the real me
and they will never see
how good of a person I can be


Usually I keep to myself
Never letting anyone in

I wanted to tell them so bad
I had good reason for not telling
It hurt when they spread the rumors
but I learned from them
they taught me to be a better person
Inside and out
They thought that they could get me down
they couldnt
now they are the ones that are falling to the ground...
when they need me..
will i be there,
to help them through their heartache and despair?
but as the person that they helped mold
ill be there even if their heart is cold
i will prove to them that they couldnt get me to be on their level
but then again....
i am an angel
but sometimes i work for the devil

* to be continued*

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  • perfect relief
    March 7, 2007

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    I would really like to see how you develop this one. It's really good so far and I like it a lot. I would really love to read the rest of this when you finish it. Good job. Thanks for the entry and much luck to you.


  • BloodStainedTear
    February 28, 2007
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    I really like this poem


  • geron
    February 28, 2007
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    it seems like everyday life

    people who breathe in vain normally will judge other people. the secret is to not care at all