when will i finally find the one?
i think i have is my search done?
you say you'll always be there
you say you'll always care
I've heard it all before
yet this time i don't know whats in store
will you really be there
will you really care
i hope you're true
and that my search ended when i found you
A contest entry
- Love by a-face-in-the-crowd.
450 points, ended February 7, 2008, 21 entries
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This is a great poem! It's kind of cautiously hopeful. I also liked the rhyming. There were a few places where the rhythm was a bit off, but I still enjoyed this poem!
Thanks for entering my contest!
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Oh I hope so too! It's hard to know when you find the right one.
Good poem, it reads easily and flows smoothly.
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