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Just we two.

Corkscrew
glasses
table
wine
leasure
pleasure
friendship
mine.
Daytime
playtime
laughter
smile
living
loving
beauty
style.
Staying
saying
compliments
feeling
revealing
sentiments.

Author notes

A pleasant meal,
a glass of red
that memory
stays in my head.

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  • lucy sky-diamond
    February 21, 2007
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    a very good poem, i enjoyed it a great deal. thank you for your entry, and good luck


  • Simply Olivia
    February 20, 2007
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    so good


  • rhondasail
    February 20, 2007

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    I love the flow of this piece. To enjoy the wine and a meal in good company. This just sounds lovely. Great imagery, brings a smile to the face and a memory to the mind. Peace, Fisherman.


  • Cup-a-Joe
    February 20, 2007
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    Ahh Memories

    Wonderful useage a words, one at a time.