Corkscrew
glasses
table
wine
leasure
pleasure
friendship
mine.
Daytime
playtime
laughter
smile
living
loving
beauty
style.
Staying
saying
compliments
feeling
revealing
sentiments.
Author notes
A pleasant meal,
a glass of red
that memory
stays in my head.
A contest entry
- Something out of the ordinary... by lucy sky-diamond.
600 points, ended March 11, 2007, 27 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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a very good poem, i enjoyed it a great deal. thank you for your entry, and good luck


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so good
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I love the flow of this piece. To enjoy the wine and a meal in good company. This just sounds lovely. Great imagery, brings a smile to the face and a memory to the mind. Peace, Fisherman.
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Ahh Memories
Wonderful useage a words, one at a time.





