Weeping,
sobbing,
wailing:
lovelorn,
forsaken.
Love
abandoned,
lessons
unlearned,
advice
untaken.
A contest entry
- Something out of the ordinary... by lucy sky-diamond.
600 points, ended March 11, 2007, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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short but to the point; a clear message that has been put across very well. thank you very much for your entry, and good luck
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Awe, the lessons of love truely are felt here Bill. We all have these times when love is involved it seems. And advice we may not take can truely leave us abandoned. Untaken. Great write my friend.
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