L ips so soft, they grace my skin, I loose my senses and give in.
E yes sobright, they pierce my soul, then mend my wound and make me whole.
T ears so cold, they scream aloud, keep my thoughts from getting to cloud.
M ind so weak,yet so aware, wipes away my every care
E ager heart, you look to me, then close your eyes and fall asleep.
D igging deeper in my heart, I watch as my world falls apart.
I n my eyes your still alive, but still- oh still- you won't revive.
E mptied heart, I start to cry, you look to me, say "LET ME DIE"
Author notes
cluck cluck~~~
much luv~
shadowed
A contest entry
- Death of a friend by sprack44.
525 points, ended February 22, 2007, 15 entries
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Very Well written!
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Thankyou!
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Wow...this is so well done! Oh what a horrible feeling it leaves...
Good luck in the contest
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Thanx!
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I n my eyes your still alive, but still- oh still- you won't revive
^^i like
very strong poem
thank you for entering
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Thankyou so much for the comment!!! Yay first comment!!!
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