Why
is
the
sky
painted
in
black
why
will
my
guy
never
come
back
why
do
I
write
one
word
at
a
time
why
do
I
fight
metre
and
rhyme
why
do
I
read
columns
of
words
why
do
I
feed
crumbs
to
the
birds
why
is
my
heart
broken
in
twain
when
will
it
start
beating
again
?
A contest entry
- Something out of the ordinary... by lucy sky-diamond.
600 points, ended March 11, 2007, 27 entries
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Comments
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a very well written and thought prvoking poem, thank you very much for your entry, and good luck
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Good questions. I found some of them funny, despite the category.
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Questions, questions
I pray you speake not: he growes worse & worse, question enrages him: Imagine smiling at my serious queries! Best Wishes.
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im almost at a loss of word. this is simply amazing! it certainly is out of the ordinary! it flows so freely and its just . . . . amazing. great great work!




