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Why

Why
is
the
sky
painted
in
black
why
will
my
guy
never
come
back
why
do
I
write
one
word
at
a
time
why
do
I
fight
metre
and
rhyme
why
do
I
read
columns
of
words
why
do
I
feed
crumbs
to
the
birds
why
is
my
heart
broken
in
twain
when
will
it
start
beating
again
?

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  • lucy sky-diamond
    February 21, 2007
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    a very well written and thought prvoking poem, thank you very much for your entry, and good luck


  • MargaretG
    February 21, 2007
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    Good questions. I found some of them funny, despite the category.


    • Keith
      February 21, 2007
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      Questions, questions

      I pray you speake not: he growes worse & worse, question enrages him: Imagine smiling at my serious queries! Best Wishes.


  • Forlorn Dreams
    February 20, 2007

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    im almost at a loss of word. this is simply amazing! it certainly is out of the ordinary! it flows so freely and its just . . . . amazing. great great work!